October 06, 2002
Ode to a belly scar
Mmmm...your belly scar.
| from inside the mind of krix at October 06, 2002 10:24 AM
snakey sinewy exclamation
with the point behind your button fly
where once scalpel slid
and suture stitched
now a permanent living
on another disfiguring
taut tantalizing texture
waiting to be read
like secret language
makes me want to touch and trace
tongue and taste
and hear the story told
dangerboy on his dangerous toy
chicks do dig scars
I want to see it above me
and then below
I want to know
your belly scar...
aaiiee! krix, you took the words right out of my mouth. touch and taste. somebody get me a fan, it's HOT in here...
My God Girl,are you trying to kill me here? Now I'm looking for that old pack of smokes I stashed somewhere. Now where the hell did I put them?
Cheeze Whiz..... Lot's of Cheeze whiz...
Ohhh! I like.....now I don't feel so bad about my belly scars!
Thanks ladies, every bit of him is its own inspiration.
Way to go duder!
mmm, belly scar poetry. love it. the scar and the poem. =)
This is a favorite because the words just flowed one Sunday morning. One day I'd like to recite this in a coffeehouse.
Krix, fantastic poem, do you have a photo showing how the scar looks below the navel? You can always e-mail me.
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